CHANGING FRONT COVER COVER LINES

I felt the 'V' apart of VINYL did not stand out enough and needed to be increasingly more projected. I added a black but not too harsh around the letter to emphasize its purpose, make it bolder and increase its attractiveness.

I received more feedback from my teacher who said that the list of bands of names (original right hand side) was 'too vague' and 'didn't indicate what they had to do with the magazine'. Taking this criticism on board I deleted this coverline and separated the bands into proper articles such as interviews.